The Dark Shadow Shrine

embrace the darkness; that you may see the light nestled within it......

Tuesday, March 24, 2015

HCIBS: Feedbak on Parental Influence Essay

(1) Feedback Pointers on ur essay: Click HERE

(2) Sample Essay structure Model 2 & 4: Click HERE (Note the signposting devices and potential content points)

(3) Sample Essay
This is a reasonably decent piece for foreign students newly introduced to the syllabus. Note that Model 1 is being used here, i.e. OV first followed by SVs with no rebuttals (but actually para 2 and para 5 can be framed as a rebuttal pair).